Over There with the Canadians at Vimy Ridge — Reading Notes
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n sent out through the communication trench to the listening post, in which they were crouched when Irving whispered the words "Look out! There she comes!"
There was really no need of his offering any such warning to his companion, for the latter could hear the whistle of the approaching shell just as well as he, but there was also no call for the punishment that the second lieutenant administered. The shell passed harmlessly over their heads and exploded behind the front line trenches of the Canadian company, of which the occupants of the spy pit were members, and almost simultaneously with the explosion, Lieut. Tourtelle struck Irving a sharp blow in the face with the back of his hand.
"There!" he said viciously, with apparently no effort to subdue the tone of his voice in accord with the strict precautionary rules of such positions. "See that you keep your thoughts to yourself hereafter or I’ll send you back to report to the captain."
Irving was astonished, as well as angered at this treatment. He was sure there was no call even for a reprimand, whereas the officer had spoken in tones quite loud enough for the enemy to hear fifty, or possibly a hundred, yards away. In fact, he was sure that if the "second looie" had any reflection in him at all, he must have experienced a thrill of apprehension very soon afterward lest the sound of his voice had been heard by some of his superior officers in the front trenches. If so, an inquiry into its meaning most certainly would follow.
Of course,-Irving resented the uncalled-for exhibition of brutality just exhibited by Lieut. Tourtelle, but he had too much military sense to show his resentment by look or act. Instead, he decided to take his punishment and the accompanying rebuke as provocative of a little self-discipline and to profit from the experience, in spite of the injustice that went with it.
"I never did like that fellow from the first day I met him," Private Ellis told himself, grinding his teeth with rage under the first impulse of revenge. "Now I know him to be the very sort I thought he was. Nobody but a coward would do what he did. He knows he’d never dare to meet me on even terms. I’d clean him up so thoroughly there wouldn’t be anything for a minnenwerfer to smell if one came along and dropped onto the spot where he ought to be. Goodness! there’s one now."
The "minnie" referred to in Irving’s soliloquy lighted right in the communication trench not more than 200 feet from the outlook pit in which the officer and the private were stationed. The explosion threw up a mass of earth, several bucketfuls of which came down into the pit as if from a giant pepper-box. One stone about the size of two fists struck Irving on his left shoulder, and for several minutes the boy feared some of the bones were broken or the joint dislocated.
But it proved to be only a bruiser and presently the young soldier was using his arm confidently, although with considerable pain. In the excitement that followed almost immediately after the explosion of this shell, he forgot the injury, although under ordinary circumstances, every movement of his left arm must have been more or less painful.
There was no shriek of warning preceding the next explosion fifty feet to the right, such as had called forth the whispered "look out" from Private Ellis that was rebuked with a blow of the hand and an equally unmilitary reprimand from the second lieutenant. But it was much more mighty in force and sound. It tore up the ground almost, it seemed, to the very edge of the pit in which the outpost was located. Strange enough, too, not nearly as much of the upheaved earth fell back into the pit as had fallen there after the explosion of the first shell. Irving felt that he knew the reason.
"That was a minnie dead sure," he told himself with a shudder. "I like the others much better. You know when they’re coming and maybe can dodge ’em. But a minnie never gives any warning. They’ve spotted this outpost and the next one’ll probably wipe us out. We’ll never know what hit us."
Evidently something of this sort was going on in the mind of Lieut. Tourtelle, for suddenly he darted back through the communication trench toward the front line.
The opening pages of Over There with the Canadians at Vimy Ridge immediately establish a setting far from the catalog’s straightforward war-and-spy categories. Two soldiers crouch in a camouflaged pit in No Man’s Land, whispering under a mist-laden dusk. The text dwells on the mud, the fog, and the whistle of an approaching shell—details that ground the scene in sensory specifics. Yet the response to that shell is not tactical but personal: Lieutenant Tourtelle strikes Private Irving Ellis with the back of his hand for speaking a warning. This moment of casual violence, delivered without regard for noise discipline, hints at tensions that may shape the narrative more than the battle itself.
Listening Posts and Loose Discipline
The excerpt from Chapter I presents a listening post as a place of enforced silence—yet the lieutenant’s blow is described as “vicious” and delivered with “apparently no effort to subdue the tone of his voice.” The contradiction between the rules of the post and the officer’s behavior is striking. The catalog lists “Spy stories” as a subject, but here the focus is on interpersonal friction rather than espionage. The whispering, the fog, and the camouflaged pit create a tense atmosphere, but the narrative quickly shifts to the internal dynamics of the pair. Readers expecting a conventional war story may find the emphasis on character conflict more prominent than tactical action.
Parachutes and Experimental Risks
Later excerpts describe Irving testing a “sky-umbrella” parachute, with careful attention to the risk of ripping silk and the need for dummy tests. The language is methodical: “Before each of his experiments, Irving had tested the ‘sky-umbrella’ with a dummy heavier than himself.” This technical detail contrasts with the catalog’s spy-story label, suggesting an interest in mechanical innovation. The parachute is used during an aeroplane flight over the front, where Irving observes the blowing up of Vimy Ridge from above. The scene mixes precise observation—trenches like “pen scratches on a dim-colored sheet”—with a philosophical aside about humanity’s greed. The catalog does not prepare readers for this blend of engineering and reflection.
Aerial Perspective and Altered Landscape
The description of Vimy Ridge’s destruction from the air is the most visually elaborate passage in the excerpts. Irving sees “an upheaval of earth” followed by a “regular concert of upheavals” that transform the ridge into a “long, a very long, crater.” Soldiers below appear as “mice” or “insects” dashing forward. The catalog subject “Vimy Ridge, Battle of, France, 1917” suggests a ground-level account, but the narrative here is airborne, emphasizing scale and detachment. Irving’s musing—“if the world could only get up here and look at itself”—introduces a reflective tone uncommon in juvenile adventure fiction. The catalog’s categories do not capture this shift in perspective or the speculative, almost philosophical, turn the text takes.
Readers approaching this work through its catalog subjects should note that the excerpts emphasize character friction, experimental technology, and an aerial vantage point more than conventional spycraft or battlefield heroics. The narrative voice alternates between precise technical description and detached observation, with occasional moments of wry commentary. The book may reward those interested in early twentieth-century adventure fiction that incorporates mechanical detail and a somewhat unconventional point of view.
Years at the desk have taught me that far-flung shelves whisper to each other. The Vimy Ridge notes, all wire and waiting, share a certain stillness with The Brownie Scouts at Silver Beach — Story, Setting & Ideas—the hush before a signal, the held breath before a wave turns. One hears it in trenches, the other in tide pools, yet both listen for what comes next.
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