The Sunbonnet Babies in Italy — A Closer Reading
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They had been sailing on the steamer for days and days. They had sailed more than four thousand miles away from their home in America. Now they were almost at the end of their journey. They would very soon be in Italy.
The big steamer was moving slowly up the beautiful Bay of Naples, straight toward the busy, noisy city of Naples. Rising from the shore, not far away, was the smoking mountain of Vesuvius, about which the Sunbonnet Babies' father had told them such strange stories.
He told them that Mount Vesuvius was like a great kettle full of boiling rock, that sometimes the fire under the kettle becomes so hot it boils over, covering the mountain sides and even the plains with melted rock and hot ashes. Such mountains, he said, are called volcanoes.
Molly and May stood on the deck of the steamer eagerly watching the smoking volcano, wondering if it would ever boil over again.
"I almost wish it would boil over now!" cried Molly. "Wouldn't it be wonderful to see red-hot rock come right out of the top of the mountain and fall down all around it!"
"Yes, it would be wonderful," said May, "but I am sure I don't want to see it. The hot ashes might even reach us here on the steamer."
"Father says he will take us to see the old city of Pompeii, which was buried by Vesuvius nearly two thousand years ago. Men are digging away the ashes and cinders now, so we can see just how the people used to live."
"Pompeii must be right over there near the foot of the mountain," said May. "Isn't it strange to think that those trees and farms may be growing on top of an old, old city?"
"Look at the big city just ahead of our boat!" cried Molly. "It is Naples. We are almost there!"
"Why, the city is the shape of a big, new moon," said May. "It curves right around the shore of this lovely, blue bay, and climbs up the hillside to meet the blue sky. Our boat is sailing straight in between the long points."
"O May! Do you suppose it is snowing at home to-day? It seems like summer here, but it is really the middle of March. The trees and the grass are all green. And there is a boat full of oranges and lemons just being unloaded."
"See that basketful of beautiful roses! I hope we can go ashore quickly. I want to buy a lovely red rose for mother to wear."
Not many minutes later the happy travelers were hurrying from the big steamer. There were other travelers going ashore, too, and a crowd of noisy, jolly people seemed to be waiting for them. Most of the women and little girls were bareheaded and wore gay-colored dresses and aprons. They were very much interested in the strange travelers, especially in the two little Sunbonnet Babies.
A smiling, brown-eyed Italian girl ran along beside them, peeping at the two happy faces hidden under the big sunbonnets, and talking very fast in a soft, sweet voice.
The Sunbonnet Babies could not understand one word she said, but they knew she liked them because she smiled so sweetly.
If it had not been for this kind little girl, Molly and May might easily have been frightened. A great many men and boys were standing close about them shouting and swinging their arms, trying to get passengers for their carriages. Even the Sunbonnet Babies' father did not quite know what to do, so many men wanted to carry his bags for him.
The little girl, seeing his trouble, looked up with a smile and asked him to follow her. She then took Molly and May each by the hand and led them through the crowd to a long line of carriages. In a moment a smiling, brown-eyed man was beside them, bowing and offering to drive them to their hotel.
The little girl called the man _il padre_, which means "father," and he spoke to her as _Tessa mia_, which means "my Tessa." Indeed, the little girl looked so much like the brown-eyed man, it was easy to guess that she was his own little daughter. They had the same bright smile, the same soft voice, and the same kind manner.
The travelers gladly stepped into the man's low carriage and told him where to drive them, saying a pleasant _grazie_ to the little girl whom they were leaving behind. Yes, they did something more than just say "thank you." They each took a big brown penny from their bags and dropped the pennies into Tessa's hand.
From the opening lines, Grover establishes a distinctive narrative voice that oscillates between the children's excited exclamations and the father's measured explanations. May's identification of Mount Vesuvius—"I believe it is a volcano"—is immediately followed by a factual paragraph about boiling rock and hot ashes. This pattern recurs throughout the excerpts: the babies' spontaneous reactions are framed by adult-provided context, creating a rhythm of wonder and instruction.
Dialogue as a Vehicle for Discovery
The Sunbonnet Babies' dialogue is marked by short, breathless sentences and repeated exclamations—"Look!" "Oh, goody!" "Oh, my!"—that convey genuine surprise. When Molly wishes Vesuvius would boil over, May counters with practical fear: "the hot ashes might even reach us." This interplay reveals distinct personalities without authorial intrusion. The father rarely speaks in full paragraphs; instead, he answers questions with concise facts, as when he explains the Blue Grotto's light: "the red and orange and yellow rays of the sunlight have been lost." The children's voices dominate the action, while the adult voice supplies the lesson.
Pacing Through Descriptive Set Pieces
The narrative alternates between rapid dialogue and slower, sensory description. In the Blue Grotto scene, the pace decelerates markedly: "The next few moments no one spoke. The Sunbonnet Babies were sure they were dreaming." Grover lingers on the visual transformation of hands into "white marble hands, softly tinted with blue" and water drops like "strings of lovely opals and sapphires." These passages suspend time, contrasting with the brisk exchanges that precede them. The shift from action to tableau mirrors the children's own transition from curiosity to awe.
Repetition and Structural Echoes
Grover uses repetition to reinforce key ideas and create a rhythmic structure. The phrase "Pompeii must be right over there" is echoed verbatim, first by May and then by the narrator. Similarly, the boatman's declaration "You are now in the beautiful Blue Grotto" is followed by a silent, dreamlike pause. These echoes serve as narrative anchors, guiding young readers through unfamiliar settings. The author also repeats sentence patterns—"It is a nymph—a really, truly nymph!"—to heighten emotional impact before the father corrects the misconception.
Shifts in Narrative Distance
At times the narrator pulls back to offer summary, as in "They had been sailing on the steamer for days and days." This distanced overview compresses time, then zooms into immediate dialogue. The effect is a controlled alternation between panoramic and close-up views. When the boat enters the grotto, the narration becomes almost claustrophobic: "The hole was not more than three feet high and three feet wide." The physical restriction mirrors the children's hushed voices, and the subsequent expansion into the vast cave interior creates a dramatic release.
Readers attentive to voice will notice how Grover calibrates the ratio of dialogue to description across chapters. The excerpts suggest that the most immersive moments occur when the children's wonder is given space to unfold without immediate explanation. Noting where the narrative slows—and where it accelerates—offers a useful entry point into the book's educational design.
Reading about the Sunbonnet Babies’ halting wonder between bursts of patient explanation reminded me of hearing my grandmother’s stories—always pausing to teach even as she drifted. Camp Mates in Michigan; or, with Pack and Paddle in the Pine Woods — Edition Insights stirred that same ache once, its quiet pine-shadowed paddling holding a steadiness I keep returning to.
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